Without Intrigue~A Short Snip of Story




Without Intrigue

Our world is different from yours. Much different.

There is no saying "follow your dreams" or "you'll succeed."

The Greats get all the dreams.

Or they claim them, that is.

In our world, the Superior proclaims that on Dream Designation day,  everyone but the Greats gets their dreams examined. If you want to be a doctor, that's sucked out of your head. The people you love are sucked out of you head. Everything you ever wanted is taken from you. 

The Greats pick and choose until they find a dream they like.

And they take it for their own.

We in exchange become empty shells. Colorless and without personality.

But they say it's best.

We won't question why they do this to us.




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What are your thought on this story? 

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 ~Kathryn



14 comments:

  1. Ooh! Very cool!:)
    -Emma-

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    1. Thank you, Emma. : D
      ~Kathryn

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  2. Wow! I could never think of anything like this! BTW, Sweet Sock's back!!! ^-^
    <3Bella

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    1. YAY I AM SO GLAD!

      ~Kathryn

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    1. Perhaps....maybe the protaganist resolved the problem! It's up to you to decide how it ends. : D
      ~Kathryn

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  4. THAT WAS AWESOME!
    The "empty shell" part sounds like dementors.
    What do the greats do with the dreams/ thoughts/ memories that they don't want?

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    1. Thanks!
      And wow, I never thought of that! You're right, it does sound like dementors!
      And, what the Greats do, is up to your imagination. : )
      ~Kathryn

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  5. Wow! This is AMAZING!!! I love it!

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    1. Thanks so much!
      ~Kathryn

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  6. Amazing! I loved the line "We in exchange become empty shells. Colorless and without personality." This is such an interesting idea. I loved the picture you used at the bottom too.
    Oh and I like your blog background!
    ~Emily

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    1. Thank you Emily. : D
      ~Kathryn

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  7. Awesome story! :)

    - Ellie

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    1. Thank you my dear. : )
      ~Kathryn

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