Train Tale



clack clack, on the track.
look out the window, it's turning back.
down down down the hill.
watch out, going fast...stay still!
down
     down
           down
splash.
into the pool of  listening lassitude.
the train has started again.
it's going
      up
    up 
up
going along smoothly, you're waiting for the lurch.
there it is again.
 then you have the elated feeling that you're up.
and you are.



∆ This poem doesn't have to just describe a train-could it describe a feeling or thing? Can you give an example?  Let me know what you think, there's no right or statement. ∆

2 comments:

  1. I think it could easily describe a feeling and a thing :) Just my opinion though <3
    ~Mads

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  2. I think this could describe other things then trains

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