Heartache

it jumped
it thumped
it beat hard
it throbbed
it raced
it skipped a beat
it beat loudly
it beat with pride
it was broken
it cried
it ached
it was sore
it turned numb
it stopped



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I think it is absolutely amazing how we connect so many of our emotions with an organ in our body.
Though this is but a few simple words, I hope I captured some realistic feelings-as far as our ability to capture feelings in words goes. :)

~ K A T H R Y N


7 comments:

  1. Okay around the line 'it cried', the poem became kinda dark. But... I liked it anyway!!
    -Dani

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    1. I'm glad you liked it!
      ~Kathryn

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  2. Awesome poem! Although there are pretty much two words each line, it held meaning and I loved it!:)
    -Emma-

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  3. Wow...Kathryn!

    ~ Rukiya

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  4. This is beautifuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuul

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  5. This is such a beautiful piece of writing! It may be short, but it has so much feeling in it ♥
    Amy xx

    Little Moon Dragon

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